Sorry. I meant it all constructively and I’m afraid some sarcasm drifted in.
Yes, starting with the opening sentence, there are just too many long boring sentences.
Examining homelessness in San Diego must necessarily proceed from a historical perspective and employ a multifaceted approach in order to best diagnose the potential causes and to identify the correct degree of social accountability for the San Diego community pertinent to solving the issue of homelessness.
Your message gets lost and leaves the reader frustrated. The rewrite in your response reads better.
Beyond that, I am raising a real question:to what extent do we let the homeless dominate public spaces? I don’t believe you dealt with that.